viernes, 11 de noviembre de 2011

Argumentative essay

OUTLINE
ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY "ABORTION"

Pattern 1

1.- Introduction
               what is going to be the essay about
2.- Body
        a) Religion
        b) Rights
        c) Rape (it is not an excuse)
3.- Conclusion
       support my ideas why women should not abort




ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY "ABORTION"

Nowadays abortion is a very controversial issue in our society, and there are many differing opinions but, I want to emphasize on that abortion is a bad decision no matter under what circumstances it is practiced, it is still a murder an innocent life and without any consciousness of what is happening.
This is a human being and the simple fact that we carry in our bodies can not believe we have the right to terminate life, using extremely cruel methods, often by the immaturity; you can die in the attempt, because many doctors do not know how to do this procedure and knowing that it is illegal to hide his death.

As the church says God gives us the life and he decides when he takes it away. No human being has the authority to take anyone´s life. The tradition of the church has always held that human life must be protected and favored from the beginning, without ignoring the difficulties that could eventually lead to a pregnancy under these conditions, the Catholic doctrines says there is not reason you can give us the right to dispose of the life of an innocent and defenseless in the womb.

Every single person in the world has the right to live, in this case the pregnant woman is carrying  with another life inside of her who also, has the right to live just because he/she is  alive, but some women says I can do whatever I want with my body, and I agree with that just that the child is not their body, he/she is another life who do not whish to come to the world, the child do not blame for the mistakes that the mother may have committed and not for that he/she has to pay for it.  The mother has to be responsible and have the baby.

Rape is manipulated, to practice the abortion, because the rape in this case the father of this child is a bad person who disserves to be in jail but, the innocent child, who is also the mother, should not pay this atrocious crime with his life. If the mother is not able to raise him/her, she can give it up for adoption. On a survey of these women found that 80% of those who had abortion had caused more harm than good and repent.


In conclusion I think that abortion should not be legal because there are women who do not understand that they have other live inside of them which has rights, just that he can not say it, but he/she can listen, move, and feel, among others, so why take the decision of kill somebody who can not fight for himself/ herself. As I mentioned before we are not the right person to take somebody’s life, because every single person has the right of live.





Sources: 

http://www.bbc.co.uk/ethics/abortion/religion/religion.shtml
http://www.religioustolerance.org/abortion.htm
http://www.nlm.nih.gov/medlineplus/abortion.html
http://www.google.com.mx/imgres?q=against+abortion&um=1&hl=es&biw=1280&bih=685&tbm=isch&tbnid=1ZXSAGLFpnrCKM:&imgrefurl=http://www.historyofabortion.net/history-of-abortion-nightmare-for-civilization/&docid=DHWLKbkeJMQbhM&imgurl=http://www.historyofabortion.net/wp-content/uploads/abortion3.png&w=349&h=421&ei=bjvcTq3sO4WlsALfmJDsDQ&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=304&vpy=217&dur=1155&hovh=247&hovw=204&tx=125&ty=126&sig=118231956285903713520&page=2&tbnh=180&tbnw=116&start=17&ndsp=20&ved=1t:429,r:7,s:17





1 comentario:

  1. I really liked very much your essay and the way you are against abortion, I just want to comment you the word emphasis in the introduction
    emphasis emphasize (as verb) or do emphasis (as noun)

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