OUTLINE
ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY "ABORTION"
Pattern 1
1.- Introduction
what is going to be the essay about
2.- Body
a) Religion
b) Rights
c) Rape (it is not an excuse)
3.- Conclusion
support my ideas why women should not abort
ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY "ABORTION"
Nowadays abortion is a very controversial
issue in our society, and there are many differing opinions but, I want to
emphasize on that abortion is a bad decision no matter under what circumstances
it is practiced, it is still a murder an innocent life and without any
consciousness of what is happening.
This is a human being and the simple fact
that we carry in our bodies can not believe we have the right to terminate
life, using extremely cruel methods, often by the immaturity; you can die in
the attempt, because many doctors do not know how to do this procedure and
knowing that it is illegal to hide his death.
As the church says God gives us the life
and he decides when he takes it away. No human being has the authority to take
anyone´s life. The tradition of the church has always held that human life must
be protected and favored from the beginning, without ignoring the difficulties
that could eventually lead to a pregnancy under these conditions, the Catholic
doctrines says there is not reason you can give us the right to dispose of the
life of an innocent and defenseless in the womb.
Every single person in the world has the right to
live, in this case the pregnant woman is carrying with another life inside of her who also, has
the right to live just because he/she is alive, but some women says I can do whatever I
want with my body, and I agree with that just that the child is not their body,
he/she is another life who do not whish to come to the world, the child do not
blame for the mistakes that the mother may have committed and not for that
he/she has to pay for it. The mother has
to be responsible and have the baby.
Rape is
manipulated, to practice the abortion, because the rape in this case the father
of this child is a bad person who disserves to be in jail but, the innocent
child, who is also the mother, should not pay this atrocious crime with his
life. If the mother is not able to raise him/her, she can give it up for
adoption. On a survey of these women found that 80% of those who had abortion
had caused more harm than good and repent.
In conclusion I
think that abortion should not be legal because there are women who do not
understand that they have other live inside of them which has rights, just that
he can not say it, but he/she can listen, move, and feel, among others, so why
take the decision of kill somebody who can not fight for himself/ herself. As I
mentioned before we are not the right person to take somebody’s life, because
every single person has the right of live.
Sources:
http://www.bbc.co.uk/ethics/abortion/religion/religion.shtml
http://www.religioustolerance.org/abortion.htm
http://www.nlm.nih.gov/medlineplus/abortion.html
http://www.google.com.mx/imgres?q=against+abortion&um=1&hl=es&biw=1280&bih=685&tbm=isch&tbnid=1ZXSAGLFpnrCKM:&imgrefurl=http://www.historyofabortion.net/history-of-abortion-nightmare-for-civilization/&docid=DHWLKbkeJMQbhM&imgurl=http://www.historyofabortion.net/wp-content/uploads/abortion3.png&w=349&h=421&ei=bjvcTq3sO4WlsALfmJDsDQ&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=304&vpy=217&dur=1155&hovh=247&hovw=204&tx=125&ty=126&sig=118231956285903713520&page=2&tbnh=180&tbnw=116&start=17&ndsp=20&ved=1t:429,r:7,s:17

I really liked very much your essay and the way you are against abortion, I just want to comment you the word emphasis in the introduction
ResponderEliminaremphasis emphasize (as verb) or do emphasis (as noun)